Author: Jennifer M.

As If!

As If!

No, we’re not talking about Valley Girl vernacular. Many writers get this wrong, including me, so I wanted to post it so we could all remember this simple rule. A conditional in literature and computer programming means using the word “IF.” As we’re writing prose, many times we’ll use a conditional as a metaphor, using…

Writing in Order

I recently read a short story that began: I looked out my apartment window through the Venetian blinds down at a street full of shadows. Do you see what’s wrong with this sentence? It’s a common mistake that many rookie writers make: it’s written out of order. You don’t look out a window, through blinds,…